Silliest Haiku Ever?
This may well be the silliest haiku I’ve ever written. But I was determined to use all five words of Poefusion’s latest prompt in a haiku:
Not so winsome gal
Flings cranberries at her prey.
Can’t lose quacky ducks.
And speaking about poetry prompts, I’ve just posted a new one: Taxing Verse Limerick & Haiku Prompt.
Technorati Tags: Animal Haiku, Duck Verse, Creative Prompts
March 28th, 2008 at 6:10 pm
very clever.. i don’t know how you do it… but you continue to do it… don’t you???
March 28th, 2008 at 7:06 pm
Thanks so much Paisley!
My husband Mark just came up with this haiku and asked me to post it:
For a spring fling
I seduced my winsome, quacky prey
With cranberries.
March 28th, 2008 at 8:03 pm
A brace of ducky flings! What fun!
March 28th, 2008 at 11:15 pm
Hey Mad Kane, thanks for stopping by Poefusion again. I love your haiku because it makes me think of those fairs that come to town. You know the ones where you shoot at those ducks with water/ pellet guns. I always enjoyed going to the 4th of July fair with my great aunt Mary as a child and playing those kind of games. Thanks for the trip down memory lane.
Also, tell your husband he is officially a haiku artist now. Have a nice weekend.
March 28th, 2008 at 11:45 pm
They are both as close to perfection as perfection gets. Much fun to read.