Deja Views
Déjà Views
By Madeleine Begun Kane
“I could swear that I’ve been here before,”
Said the gal as she stepped through the door.
“And this déjà vu sense
Is making me tense.
I’m not sure I can take any more.”
“Just ignore it,” responded her mate.
“You’ve never spent time in this state.
It’s the house of our dreams,
And that’s why it seems
So familiar. Let’s buy it. It’s fate.”
(Inspired by Writers Island’s déjà vu prompt. And speaking of prompts, there’s still plenty of time to participate in my latest poetry prompt. How do you participate? Just write a limerick or haiku about poetry or writing and use Mr. Linky to post your themed link.)
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March 22nd, 2008 at 4:40 pm
either that or it is an foreboding conclusion to some masterminds evil plan!!!!
bbbbwwwwwaaaahhhhh!!!!!!
March 22nd, 2008 at 8:14 pm
I wouldn’t buy it! This is the perfect opening scene for a horror movie! Nice piece thiough.
March 23rd, 2008 at 2:30 am
“You’ve never spent time in this state”
hehhe I thought she had never been sober before
March 23rd, 2008 at 1:20 pm
Ah, Mad my friend. It just keeps coming. Love it!
toujours, lanie-bd
( I’m on a different toot lately.)
March 23rd, 2008 at 8:39 pm
why does this stir that famous old shower scene? Eerie! Well done - I love it - it’s definitely double sided!