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Two Haiku

When prompted to use the words curious, eventually, and shower in a poem, this haiku more or less wrote itself:

I am curious:
Will you eventually
Shower?  I hope so.

And here’s another haiku, this one inspired by an earth-themed prompt:

There’s no earthly way
I’d ever vote for global
Warming deniers.

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9 Responses to “Two Haiku”

  1. Chris says:
    December 31, 2007 at 7:58 pm

    Simply brilliant!

  2. SandyCarlson says:
    December 31, 2007 at 9:19 pm

    These are fun and intelligent and witty! God bless you in the new year.

  3. TC says:
    January 1, 2008 at 11:19 am

    It’s always kind of scary when you have to wonder if someone is going to shower :)

  4. paisley says:
    January 1, 2008 at 12:42 pm

    well this recently showered ever doubting soul just wants to wish you a happy new year !!!!!!

  5. jadey says:
    January 1, 2008 at 9:15 pm

    Nice haiku I liked it alot

  6. madkane says:
    January 2, 2008 at 1:10 am

    Thanks very much everyone!

  7. SlyGly says:
    January 2, 2008 at 1:05 pm

    These two haikus gave me a nice grin; thanks! I do plan to shower in the next couple of hours.

  8. Jeques says:
    January 3, 2008 at 7:08 pm

    The first haiku is powerful ~ a self talk that paints a nice unfinished imagery in the mind of someone looking up the skies, palms open questioning and hoping. The reader in the end gives the complete picture.

    I saw it rained.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

  9. madkane says:
    January 4, 2008 at 2:32 am

    Thanks SlyGly! And Jecques, I really like your interpretation!